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Disorganized thinking in an otherwise bright difficult child
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<blockquote data-quote="vtheartmama" data-source="post: 403442" data-attributes="member: 10980"><p>Hi there...I'm a newbie but thought I'd comment, I hope you don't mind. I think if one looks beyond the grammatical errors, the substance of the paragraph is quite good. To me is just seems rushed, the grammatical errors are fairly common - continuity in tenses and learning when to use commas with "and" or "but". The thought behind the last sentence was good, but perhaps he didn't take the time to figure out a better way to get his point across and reverted to slang..and/or he could have been really tired when writing it..I've written a "few" rushed tired papers myself and that's usually how they turn out. If that is how he writes all the time it's a different matter..but maybe he just needs to slow down?</p><p></p><p>ok forgot part about out of context cliches and reference errors...he still could just need to slow down and pay more attention but a tutor might help him do that and work on the harder parts..</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="vtheartmama, post: 403442, member: 10980"] Hi there...I'm a newbie but thought I'd comment, I hope you don't mind. I think if one looks beyond the grammatical errors, the substance of the paragraph is quite good. To me is just seems rushed, the grammatical errors are fairly common - continuity in tenses and learning when to use commas with "and" or "but". The thought behind the last sentence was good, but perhaps he didn't take the time to figure out a better way to get his point across and reverted to slang..and/or he could have been really tired when writing it..I've written a "few" rushed tired papers myself and that's usually how they turn out. If that is how he writes all the time it's a different matter..but maybe he just needs to slow down? ok forgot part about out of context cliches and reference errors...he still could just need to slow down and pay more attention but a tutor might help him do that and work on the harder parts.. [/QUOTE]
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