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Next shot at letter to PO...(LONG)
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<blockquote data-quote="DaisyFace" data-source="post: 304851" data-attributes="member: 6546"><p>K---</p><p> </p><p>My first impression is that your letter is very wordy....and I admit that my eyes began to glaze as I read it.</p><p> </p><p>I think you need to shorten your sentences, use simpler words and even bullet-point your main arguments. I can't imagine too many people giving your argument a thorough read, and so you need to ensure that your point is clear--even in a brief perusal of this letter.</p><p> </p><p>Just my two cents...</p><p> </p><p>--DaisyFace</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="DaisyFace, post: 304851, member: 6546"] K--- My first impression is that your letter is very wordy....and I admit that my eyes began to glaze as I read it. I think you need to shorten your sentences, use simpler words and even bullet-point your main arguments. I can't imagine too many people giving your argument a thorough read, and so you need to ensure that your point is clear--even in a brief perusal of this letter. Just my two cents... --DaisyFace [/QUOTE]
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