difficult child's English essay

PiperThree

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that was awesome!!!
Loved the last line - out with the bad in with the good. Can be applied to so many things to so many people.

Piper
 

Ephchap

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Well, I was in tears and smiling at the same time reading it, Nancy. It certainly sounds like J has realized where that life was leading, and she's thankful things turned around and thankful for her family. What a wonderful update! I'm thrilled for her and for you.

Hugs,
Deb
 

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call 911........call 911
Nancy,

For a young girl she has quite an ease in her style of writing that makes you WANT to keep reading what happens next. I think she's a natural writer. Not only does her essay show maturity, but for her age it's so well written. I like her perspective in the story too on where she places herself as she's writing this. Very well written great flow. I would enjoy her works as an author.

Thank you for sharing.

Hugs and typewritten letters (double spaced manuscripts)
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